Monday, January 31, 2011

I was Awake I was Lucky

Seasons come Seasons go
Nothing that I feel
Who thought a season could be so special?

Sky was dark I felt board
I was waiting with no hopes
Diving in the ocean looking for wish

A sudden knock, on my heart door
I was shivering, a Question
Who that can be?
I was afraid to open the door
I put head out of window to see who knocks on my door

Sun went off, moon came up
Moon went off, sun came up

I was blind, had no brains
I was listening more than speaking
Door lock opened, door not yet opened

Sun went off, moon came up
Moon went off, sun came up


Key is stolen, I thought, I was searching
I was wrong, key has taken door has opened
Did I open? Question
I had no sense

What I saw was an angel
Flew and land on my heart
Door got closed, space got filled

Hope I was awake
Else would be a dream
I was lucky, I was awoke

But I was wrong
A SEASON TURNED EVERYTHNG ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!

9 comments:

  1. You are facing an eternal truth and you have proved another eternal truth, that is people live on hopes. When one hope fades away they hang on another. No one can live without a hope.

    Better if you used full words rather than using u & cos.

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  2. is it u Salinda.. unbelievable!!!!!!

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  3. It's excellent.. U have a gr8 hidden talent..

    Keep it up.. Can go long..
    Yas U can.. All the best..

    http://thelifefeelit.blogspot.com

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  4. cant believe dat u can right these kind of verses.. anyway those r really nice.... Keep it up & all the best..

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  5. This one is awesome sali... It just felt deep in my heart!

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  6. U have a creative mind...keep it up...dis is great...:)

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  7. Seasons come Seasons go
    I wish for another Season to come to turn everything on for your happiness.

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